I enjoyed this book more than anything else we’ve read so
far, primarily because of the style in which it was written and because of the
focus of the expedition itself. Arnesen and Bancroft narrate the book
themselves, likely with the help of their friends’ memories and their own
journals kept during the trek. However, their narratives demonstrate a high
level of reflection, planning, and revising in the writing process. This more
cleaned-up, novel version of an adventure narrative was more appealing to me as
a reader looking for a thrill and a connection to the material. I appreciated
the straight-forward relaying of events and enjoyed the concentration upon the
women’s reflections of and during the different parts of their trip. I think
that including those reflective aspects in the writing, indeed focusing on
them, allowed the women to more effectively relay the messages behind what they
were doing and the lessons they learned.
In addition, I felt that the two Annapurna narratives contained
little in the way of meaningful lessons to take away from the text and the
reading experience of the adventure. Herzog was focused on a more journalistic
reporting of his trip, and Blum seemed to follow the same track, though she
included a more intimate look into her trip. Arnesen and Bancroft, on the other
hand, were able to tell their story in a way that communicated the message of
their adventure to their readers, extending the network of people affected by
their efforts. They included descriptions of the highs and the lows, as well as
their own personal struggles, but touched on all these aspects gently, using
enough detail to create a picture for the reader, but not so much as to
distract from the purpose of the book / trip or covet a specific reaction from
the reader. Although I knew I was being drawn into the “trap” of the book,
affected by the story and wanting to have my own adventures and affect positive
change in the world around me, I also felt that this was not a bad trap to fall
into, and I did so gladly. I think that as a narrative, No Horizon is So Far was a success; as a team, Arnesen and Bancroft
and their company were a success; the trip they made was in many ways a success
measured through both an historical and a personal lens; and I think that what
the adventure left behind for the world was a sweeping success. Finally - a
crazy trip made by crazy people for a tangible, noble cause that not only served their
personal ambitions, but also served to accomplish what they wanted: change the
world, inspire others. And they left behind a company to aid in further
affectation of dreams. A good read, and a good study of why people do
adventures and what can be gotten out of them.
A note: I titled my blog as such because I found that Arnesen's and Bancroft's struggle later on, after the trek, with their decision to get picked up before crossing the ice shelf, was an Annapurna in itself. (Mountain/Adventure metaphor alert!) They had to reconcile themselves to that decision and accept the small defeat, finding a way to take all they could from what they did accomplish and to shape that into a worthwhile victory. As with climbing a big mountain, the women needed the team they inspired (the children) to inspire them in this regard - it was a victory, even if it wasn't the perfect victory. Also the logistical struggles they faced as a company before and during the trek struck me as an Annapurna. And of course, the pursuit of inspiring others long-term by their own efforts was a demanding mountain to be conquered as well.
A note: I titled my blog as such because I found that Arnesen's and Bancroft's struggle later on, after the trek, with their decision to get picked up before crossing the ice shelf, was an Annapurna in itself. (Mountain/Adventure metaphor alert!) They had to reconcile themselves to that decision and accept the small defeat, finding a way to take all they could from what they did accomplish and to shape that into a worthwhile victory. As with climbing a big mountain, the women needed the team they inspired (the children) to inspire them in this regard - it was a victory, even if it wasn't the perfect victory. Also the logistical struggles they faced as a company before and during the trek struck me as an Annapurna. And of course, the pursuit of inspiring others long-term by their own efforts was a demanding mountain to be conquered as well.
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